Saturday, April 25, 2026

Review of "Finlay Donovan Crosses the Line: A Comic Thriller" by Elle Cosimano

  


In this 6th book in the comical 'Finlay Donovan' series, Finlay's friend/nanny is under house arrest for theft, and Finlay wants to prove someone else is guilty.

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Virginia resident Finlay Donovan is a divorced mother and romance novelist who has a knack for getting in and out of trouble.



Finlay met her live-in nanny (and now best friend) Veronica Ruiz (Vero) about a year ago, when Vero was on the run from a theft charge in in her home state of Maryland.



Since then Finlay and Vero have buried bodies; got involved with the Russian mafia; acquired boyfriends; and had all manner of kooky adventures.



Unfortunately, the Maryland police finally caught up with Vero, and she's been extradited and charged with stealing money from her sorority house.



The crime happened like this: In Vero's senior year of college, she was on the executive board of her sorority with two other girls, Ava and Mia. The threesome decided they could make some money hosting underground poker nights, and accumulated $200,000, which was kept in Vero's room.



Vero went out to a party one night, and when she returned, the money was gone. Vero was blamed for taking it, and to avoid arrest, Vero went on the run Everyone involved with the poker games got into big trouble with the cops and the school.....and the parents of students who'd lost all their tuition money went ballistic.



Now, outfitted with an ankle monitor, Vero is under house arrest in the Maryland home of her mother Norma and aunt Gloria. Vero's public defender is still wet behind the ears, and it looks like Vero will be convicted if the real culprit isn't exposed.



Finlay is determined to help Vero, so she entrusts the care of her children, 5-year-old Delia and 2-year-old Zach, to her boyfriend, police detective Nick Anthony.



Finlay then takes off for Maryland with Vero's boyfriend Javi.



In Maryland, Finlay, Vero, Javi, and Vero's cousin Ramón.....



......embark on a series of escapades to uncover the real thief. This is easier said than done because Vero is permitted only limited excursions while under house arrest, and her ankle monitor shrieks at ear-splitting decibels if she stays out past her curfew.

To further the investigation, Finlay contacts her acquaintance Cameron (Cam), an 18-year-old high school dropout who was a hacker for the Russian mafia. Cam can find anyone's name and address from a license plate number, and he can 'fool' Vero's ankle monitor into reporting she's at home.



Finlay and Vero - with the help of Javi and Ramón - contact people involved in the poker games, especially Vero's sorority sisters and some fraternity boys, most of whom have graduated.





The amateur sleuths uncover all sorts of nefarious activity on the night the poker money was stolen, as well as an ongoing counterfeit ring. Finlay and Vero hope to wring a confession out of someone before Vero goes to trial, but it's a challenging enterprise.

Meanwhile, Vero is being harassed. The home of Vero's mother and aunt (where Vero' is staying) is vandalized with raw eggs that say things like bitch, liar, crook; rocks are thrown through the windows with messages calling Vero a thief; burning dog poop is left on the porch; and so on.



As always in this series, there's a good deal of comic relief. For instance:

🌸🌸 Vero and four elderly Maryland neighbors named Eugene, Joan, Lenore, and Wendell play 'Go Fish' for old Halloween and Christmas candy. Here's an example of the conversation as a game finishes up:

Vero: We'll play again tomorrow.

Lenore: But tomorrow is Taco Tuesday.

Joan: Jesus, Mary, and Joseph, tomorrow's Friday Lenore. Get with the program.

Lenore: There's a program?



🌸🌸 Finlay's literary agent Sylvia arranges for Finlay to have a Facebook page, to promote her romance novels. Finlay's nosy neighbor Stacy posts comments about Finlay's 'hot cop boyfriend' and starts a 'boxers or briefs' poll about him. The neighbors then publish Twitter posts with the hashtag 'hotcopcrotchwatch'. Stacy votes for briefs.



By the conclusion of the novel, the culprit is revealed, and a cliffhanger ending whets the reader's appetite for the next Finlay Donovan book.

Vero's mom and aunt are great cooks, so here's one of their dinner menus: tortillas with picadillo; and bread pudding with a sugar-crusted top.




Tortillas with Picadillo


Bread Pudding with a Sugar-Crusted Top

I'm a fan of the series, but this book is a bit disappointing. First off, the crime doesn't ring true. How would a sorority glean $200,000 from an underground poker game? And would Vero be foolish enough to leave the money in her room? That's crazy!! Also, robbery isn't as exciting as the murders, burials, exhumations, and so on featured in previous books.

Still, I'd recommend the novel to Finlay Donovan fans for an entertaining afternoon's reading.

Thanks to Netgalley, Elle Cosimano, and Minotaur for an ARC of the book.

 Rating: 3 stars 

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